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 \nn{Conclusion}
 
-The objectives of the thesis have been to create the Password Compromise
-Monitoring Tool aimed at security-conscious user in order to validate their
-assumptions on the security of their credentials. The thesis opened by diving
-into cryptography topics such as encryption and briefly mentioned TLS.
+The objectives of the thesis have been to create a tool that would enable users
+to verify the potentiality of their compromise in time, i.e. monitor it, by
+validating the assumptions on the security of their credentials.
 
-Additionally, security mechanisms such as Site Isolation and Content Security
-Policy, commonly employed by mainstream browsers of today, were introduced and
-the reader learnt how Content Security Policy is easily and dynamically
-configured.
+In the theoretical part, conceptual foundations and technical underpinnings of
+common pieces of the infrastructure were attended to and explained, with a
+focus relating to creating web applications. Additionally, security mechanisms
+such as Site Isolation and Content Security Policy, commonly employed by
+mainstream browsers of today, were briefly introduced and it was proven how
+Content Security Policy could be configured simply and quickly. Furthermore,
+the criteria for local and online data sources were evaluated.
 
 An extensive body of the thesis then revolved around the practical part,
-describing everything from tooling used through high-level view of
-application's architecture to implementation of specific parts of the
-application across the stack.
+describing everything from tooling and development processes used, to
+high-level view of application architecture, and then dove into implementation
+details of specific parts of the application across the stack. Import of local
+breach data and constructing database queries using a graph-like API were also
+highlighted.
 
-Finally, the practical part concluded by broadly depicting validation
-methods used to verify if the application worked correctly.
 
-The author would like to recognise that there are certain aspects of the thesis
-in the need of further development. It is necessary to admit that not
-everything could have realistically been realised in the limited timespan and
-scope imposed on the project to prevent diverging. The concerns mentioned above
-constitute clear candidates for future work of the author who intends to
-improve on the existing state, for example accessibility-wise. The author's
-unfamiliarity with the accessibility tooling sometimes compromised on the
-quality in this segment of the application, but it is a known deficiency.
-Furthermore, the list of tasks for the future may also contain adding
-\emph{fuzzing} tests for the program, producing Software Bill of Materials,
-utilising additional immutable database or unifying the frontend design
-language across the pages.
+Various deployment and configuration scenarios were considered, the validation
+methods used to verify the correct working of the application were described
+and justified, and the practical part concluded by showing screenshots of the
+application in use.
 
-The program does have a very solid core that for instance listens for OS
-signals, handles graceful shutdown and supports structured logging but still
-has room for improvements, despite the fact that its creation has been
-best-effort. Due to a number of reasons mentioned earlier, it should not be
-called an utterly \emph{finished} project yet, but it can already serve a clear
-purpose.
+The list of potential improvements for the future may also be amended by adding
+\emph{fuzzing} tests for the program to help uncover potential bugs, producing
+Software Bill of Materials to aid in ensuring compliance, and utilising
+additional immutable database for activity logs.
+
+The program  does have a very solid core, it listens for OS signals and can
+handle shutdowns gracefully. It supports structured logging, with the option to
+plug in a log exporter. Most importantly, it gives users a tool in the battle
+against the always vigilant attackers that are after their passwords.
+
+Even though it might not be called an utterly \emph{finished} project yet, it
+can already serve a clear purpose.
 
 
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