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@@ -1727,39 +1727,46 @@ a testing instance; therefore, limits to prevent abuse might be imposed.
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 \nn{Conclusion}
 
-This thesis opened by introducing common terminology and continued with a dive
+The objectives of the thesis have been to create the Password Compromise
-into cryptography topics such as encryption, mentioned Diffie-Hellman key
+Monitoring Tool aimed at security-conscious user in order to validate their
-distribution scheme and briefly mentioned TLS. Further, it discussed the inner
+assumptions on the security of their credentials. The thesis opened by
-workings of browsers and the protocols that underpin them.
+introducing common terminology and continued with a dive into cryptography
+topics such as encryption, Diffie-Hellman key distribution scheme and briefly
+mentioned TLS. Furthermore, it discussed the inner workings of browsers and the
+protocols that underpin them.
 
 Additionally, security mechanisms such as Site Isolation and Content Security
-Policy, that are commonly employed by mainstream browsers of today were
+Policy, commonly employed by mainstream browsers of today, were
 introduced and the reader learnt how Content Security Policy is easily and
 dynamically configured.
 
-The large part of the thesis then revolved around the practical part, described
+An extensive body of the thesis then revolved around the practical part,
-everything from tooling used through application high-level-view architecture
+describing everything from tooling used through application high-level-view
-to implementation of specific parts of the application across the stack.
+architecture to implementation of specific parts of the application across the
+stack.
 
-Finally, the practical part concluded by extensively describing validation
+Finally, the practical part concluded by broadly depicting validation
-methods used to verify the application worked correctly.
+methods used to verify if the application worked correctly.
 
-Of course, there are things that the author wishes were done differently or
+The author would like to recognise that there are certain aspects of the thesis
-engineered better, but not everything could realistically be realised in the
+in the need of further development. It is necessary to admit that not
-limited timespan and scope that had to be imposed on the project to prevent
+everything could have realistically been realised in the limited timespan and
-diverging. This constitutes clear candidates for future work that improves on
+scope imposed on the project to prevent diverging. The concerns mentioned above
-the existing state, for example accessibility-wise. Author's unfamiliarity with
+constitute clear candidates for future work of the author who intends to
-the accessibility tooling sometimes compromising on the quality in this segment
+improve on the existing state, for example accessibility-wise. The author's
-of the application, but it is a known deficiency. Further, on the list of tasks
+unfamiliarity with the accessibility tooling sometimes compromised on the
-for the future also remained adding \emph{fuzzing} tests for the program,
+quality in this segment of the application, but it is a known deficiency.
-producing Software Bill of Materials, utilising additional immutable database
+Furthermore, the list of tasks for the future may also contain adding
-or unifying the frontend design language across the pages.
+\emph{fuzzing} tests for the program, producing Software Bill of Materials,
+utilising additional immutable database or unifying the frontend design
+language across the pages.
 
 The program does have a very solid core that for instance listens for OS
 signals, handles graceful shutdown and supports structured logging but still
-has room for improvements, despite the fact that its creation really was
+has room for improvements, despite the fact that its creation has been
-best-effort. Due to the list of things mentioned earlier, it cannot really be
+best-effort. Due to a number of reasons mentioned earlier, it should not be
-called a \emph{finished} project yet, but it can already serve a purpose.
+called an utterly \emph{finished} project yet, but it can already serve a clear
+purpose.
 
 
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